On having a cursory glance at details in commence step the beans are sorted manually through hand. Subseguently the coffee of beans is cleaned with the aid of sieve then beans are dried in sunlight for a month afterward the farmer is raked and turned to dye beans. Therefor beans is stored in silo prior to sent to mill by truck
Continuing in seventh steps the warker is done to hull after in the order of purify results filter machine is graded into powder form as well as started to bagging into bags for selling or powder coffee is roast by roasting machine nextly it is packed in products and delivered in market for selling
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...rsory glance at details in commence step the beans are sorted manually through ha...
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...rted manually through hand. Subseguently the coffee of beans is cleaned with the ...
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...d in silo prior to sent to mill by truck Continuing in seventh steps the warker ...
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... Continuing in seventh steps the warker is done to hull after in the order of pu...
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...ull after in the order of purify results filter machine is graded into powder for...
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... form as well as started to bagging into bags for selling or powder coffee is ro...
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...tarted to bagging into bags for selling or powder coffee is roast by roasting ma...
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...wder coffee is roast by roasting machine nextly it is packed in products and deli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 518.0 965.302439024 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 115.0 196.424390244 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50434782609 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.27472217062 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22367396394 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669565217391 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 158.4 283.868780488 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.167503584 43.030603864 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.666666667 112.824112599 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.3333333333 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0385496638722 0.215688989381 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234101947022 0.103423049105 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0180173833347 0.0843802449381 21% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0282118240803 0.15604864568 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.000284961048776 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.2329268293 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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