the chart below gives information on the global sale of hybrid vehicle
The bar chart gives information about selling of hybrid both fuel and electricity on the global from 2006 to 2009.
As can be seen from the chart, there was a approximately double increase in the number global sale between 360000 and 720000. In addition, almost rates tended upward. Japan rates was the most significant rise in the bar.
It is clear that US rate reached a peak at 350000 in the year 2007, followed by moderate decrease by 60000. Before selling from US hit the highest point, roughly two-third as much as money from sale in 2006 as in 2007.
It goes without saying that starting at the lowest point in 2006, there was a slight increase by 40000 from 2006 to 2008. Further more, the year 2009 saw a significant acceleration at 340000, reached a peak, respectively. Moreover, other was gradually rise during four years by 50000.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s can be seen from the chart, there was a approximately double increase in the nu...
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Line 7, column 253, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'risen'.
Suggestion: risen
...ectively. Moreover, other was gradually rise during four years by 50000.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, third, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75675675676 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50463412718 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655405405405 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 191.7 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0665927567 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2222222222 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14781988458 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580987000062 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104455154559 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114470796799 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123506183058 0.0819641961636 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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