The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

The bar chart gives data regarding the hours spent on leisure activities based on the male and female gender and various employment statues during an average week between the years 1998 and 1999.

Overall, males enjoyed much more leisure time in all employment status that their information was available for both sexes compared to females. In both unemployment and retirement periods, males and females enjoyed leisure time much more than that of another employment status.

Men who were unemployed and retired were the same in terms of an amount of leisure time engaged, at approximately 85 hours per week averagely. Similarly, this trend was reflected in women, at just under 80 hours.

Regarding full-time employed people, we can see that while men spent about 45 hours on leisure activities, just 37 hours dedicated to leisure time by women being employed full-time. Meanwhile, there is no data about how much time employed part-time men and men who were doing household jobs spent on leisure, women on these jobs enjoyed 40 and 50 hours of leisure time during a week, respectively.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, similarly, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17877094972 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60245267034 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614525139665 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8202760239 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.428571429 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384523907946 0.215688989381 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178397076443 0.103423049105 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785056054644 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204355816718 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881681768077 0.0819641961636 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.