the chart below shows the amount of lesiure time enjoyed by males and females of different employement status.
The chart here compares the hours of leisure time spent by males and females with different employement status every week.
The chart clearly shows that both retired and unemployed males and females have the maximum hours of leisure time during each week.
Firstly, talking about full time employee's, here the males have more free time than females. During a week they have closely 50 hours of free time around eight hours more than females. Talking about part time employee's, the part time employed females have slightly more leisure time (around 40 hours) compared fully employed females. As stated earlier the unemployed males and females top the chart with highest leisure time which is around 80 hours a week for males and nearly 70 hours a week for females. People who have retired also find almost the same amount of leisure time. Lastly the free hours for housewives are anticipated to be around 60 hours a week.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 24, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... each week. Firstly, talking about full time employees, here the males have more fre...
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Line 9, column 200, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... hours more than females. Talking about part time employees, the part time employed femal...
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Line 9, column 225, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... Talking about part time employees, the part time employed females have slightly more lei...
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Line 9, column 398, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the highest'.
Suggestion: with the highest
...mployed males and females top the chart with highest leisure time which is around 80 hours a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, so, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95512820513 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11630710267 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49358974359 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.515140704 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.625 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271657394303 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147218571509 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105208647079 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254202417795 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743836818155 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.