The given tabular chart illustrate the information about annual number of rentals and sales formats of films in particular for different stores in the time period of 2002 to 2011.
Overall, rentals store showed a steadily decreased the trend in all years.’’While” DVD sales store showed up board and a stable trend. Although, VHS sales steadily on decreasing line.
It can be seen that, rentals was about more than 150,000 being higher than VHS the sales approximately, less then 50,000 in 2002.
However,The figure showed that, there was only 50,000 to less than 50,000 number in 2002 to 2005 of VHS a sales. Where as, after 2000 5VHS sales the format was not addressed.
The figure showed that, there was only 50,000 to less than 50,000 number in 2002 to 2005 of VHS sales. Where as, after 2000 5VHS sales format was not addressed.
Moving further, the sales of DVD players was around 50,000 in 2002. while, the demand of DVD player steadily hit the peak point during 2002 to 2007 at 100,000 and more than 200,000. Moreover, the sales of Blu-ray was not if acted in the mention years neither VHS sales nor blue ray sales crossed the level of 100,000 respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ore showed up board and a stable trend. Although, VHS sales steadily on decreasing line....
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Line 4, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...ing line. It can be seen that, rentals was about more than 150,000 being higher...
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Line 4, column 112, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... than VHS the sales approximately, less then 50,000 in 2002. However,The figure ...
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Suggestion: , The
...y, less then 50,000 in 2002. However,The figure showed that, there was only 50,0...
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Line 6, column 114, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
... number in 2002 to 2005 of VHS a sales. Where as, after 2000 5VHS sales the format was n...
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Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
...00 number in 2002 to 2005 of VHS sales. Where as, after 2000 5VHS sales format was not a...
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Suggestion:
... 5VHS sales format was not addressed. Moving further, the sales of DVD players...
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Suggestion: While
... DVD players was around 50,000 in 2002. while, the demand of DVD player steadily hit ...
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Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... steadily hit the peak point during 2002 to 2007 at 100,000 and more than 200,00...
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Suggestion:
... hit the peak point during 2002 to 2007 at 100,000 and more than 200,000. Moreov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, then, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87192118227 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82084983948 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502463054187 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5184913498 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9090909091 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208276395113 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995862398954 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874729840738 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140480812593 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10156370659 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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