The given histogram chart reveals the information about sales in six products by company, in the first quarter of the year. The circular chart depicts the information about five products sales by the same company. The data is calibrated in percentum. Which is clearly and coherently representated.
It can be seen that, In the first quarter of the year, clothes, and food products were more sales by a company in first three months of the year. Moving further, the toys were not a best in sale, at one in twenty percent. Moreover, computer had been sale by company at, one in ten percent. The sale of other, and electronic products were only less than five percent, and a five percent in first quarter of the year. (Respectively)
Secondly, In the second quarter of the year, the sale of the toys was increased at, less than three percent. Whereas, the sale of the food, and clothes had been decreased at, one in ten, and a five percent. Probing ahead, neither computer, nor other electronic products cross the level of sales at, one in ten percent, in the second quarter of the year.
In conclusion, it is evident that, the sale by company was more in food, and clothes in first quarter of the year. The second quarter of the year, company sell more toys, as compare to the first quarter of the year.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 215, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ive products sales by the same company. The data is calibrated in percentum. Which ...
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Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the year. The second quarter of the year , company sell more toys, as compare to t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, second, secondly, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 234.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63247863248 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44162633464 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.41452991453 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.482926829268 1449% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0259212015 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3846153846 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279294129198 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122338807921 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0820702319501 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198955121476 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508469708137 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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