The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.
The given graph gives information about international sales for the top fifth cellular phones companies during the years 2009 and 2013. The units sold measured in million.
In general, it can be seen that Samsung and Nokia companies achieved the highest sales compared with other than brand in 2009. While the Apple brand was the lowest sales in 2009 then increased in the next years but still lower than Samsung and Nokia.
Beginning with 2009, it can be observed that the units sold for Samsung were more than 200 million. However the Apple sold around 30 million. The sales for Nokia were closed the Samsung selling, which were approximately 440 million. Whereas the sales for LG and ZTE were 120 and 40 million respectively.
Moving to 2011, it can be witnessed that the sales of Samsung, Apple and ZTE increased to around 340, 90, and 50 respectively. While the sales of Nokia and LG declined slightly to 420 and 80 million respectively.
Finally, in 2013 the sales for Samsung reached to peak around 450 million. While LG company decreased slowly by 10 million compared with 2011.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...09 and 2013. The units sold measured in million. In general, it can be seen that Samsu...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...for Samsung were more than 200 million. However the Apple sold around 30 million. The s...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...were 120 and 40 million respectively. Moving to 2011, it can be witnessed that...
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ung reached to peak around 450 million. While LG company decreased slowly by 10 milli...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, so, still, then, whereas, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87634408602 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45512976388 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1665587218 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5833333333 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148218410181 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619820749284 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587887082912 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990247782685 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537420892839 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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