The following bar chart reflets the frequency of Americans dined out in the eateries providing fast-food from 2003 to 2013.
Ranging from 2003 to 2013 , the tendies varid in each group accounting how often they ate in the relating restaurant.Those who dined daily and who refused fast food decreased 1% during the first three years, whereas the proportion stablised until 2013. So did the ones ate a few times a year, though this group increased almost 2% from 2003 to 2006.
To the ones grouped on several times and once a week, they shared the similar tendency, climbing from 17% and 31% to 20% and 33% respectively, ending with 16% and 28% seperately. By contrast, an opposite tendency was observed in people ate once or twice a month, which dropped by 5% between 2003 and 2006, bouncing to approximately 33% in 2013.
In conclusion, slight decreases occured on the those who ate fast food daily and who declined to it.Besides,obviouse decline were found in the groups dined several time and once per week. Futhermore , tiny upwards tendency was shown in the people ate a few times a year comparing with a noiceable one in the ones dining once or twice a month, Finally, the proportion of groups eating once a week and once or twice a month generally accounts for one third of the whole population.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
...03 to 2013. Ranging from 2003 to 2013 , the tendies varid in each group account...
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Suggestion: Those
...ten they ate in the relating restaurant.Those who dined daily and who refused fast fo...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: DID_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean 'eat'?
Suggestion: eat
...n stablised until 2013. So did the ones ate a few times a year, though this group i...
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Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... the similar tendency, climbing from 17% and 31% to 20% and 33% respectively, end...
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Suggestion: Besides
... fast food daily and who declined to it.Besides,obviouse decline were found in the grou...
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Suggestion: , obviouse
...ood daily and who declined to it.Besides,obviouse decline were found in the groups dined ...
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Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'several times'.
Suggestion: several times
... decline were found in the groups dined several time and once per week. Futhermore , tiny up...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...veral time and once per week. Futhermore , tiny upwards tendency was shown in the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, so, third, whereas, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79203539823 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76421241365 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579646017699 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.1658006151 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.714285714 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2857142857 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147381852478 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809619261445 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547019653856 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107379330139 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397890089775 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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