The chart below shows information about European people of different age groups who went to the gym once a month or more between 1990 and 2010
The diagram illustrates how much information from the myriad different age groups who worked out once a month or two in European citizens at 4 years intervals over a period of 16 years, commencing from 1990.
In general, while the groups of gym rats from 18 to 44 moved upward, the pattern for a group 45 and over had some alteration over the period.
As far as the first year of the surveyed stint is concerned, the proportion of group workers from 25 to 34 was approximately 9.5% go to the gym, the percentage of the group between 18 to 24 was just lower than the group of people from 18 to 24, with 0.5%. In addition, the pattern for the group 18 to 24 was twofold compared to both two groups 35 to 44 and 45 and over age, in 1990.
Thereafter, in 1994, the percentage of the group 25-34 had a slight increase, at proximity 19%, the figure for the group of adolescents from 18 to 24 had overtaken the groups of gym goers between 25-34, respectively 32% and 30% in 1998, the proportion of people go to the gym from 18-24 reached the peak, nearly 60% in 2006 before had some fluctuations at the end of the period. Moreover, the others had a sharp increase at the end of the period in 2010.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...had a slight increase, at proximity 19%, the figure for the group of adolescents ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30973451327 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52519607952 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504424778761 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.7069316659 43.030603864 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.333333333 112.824112599 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.6666666667 22.9334400587 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214355510297 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115394948323 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603368137188 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141118451768 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602592075973 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.31 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...had a slight increase, at proximity 19%, the figure for the group of adolescents ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30973451327 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52519607952 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504424778761 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.7069316659 43.030603864 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.333333333 112.824112599 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.6666666667 22.9334400587 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214355510297 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115394948323 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603368137188 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141118451768 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602592075973 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.31 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.