The chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the percentage of household in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given illustration represents the number of rented and owned accommodation over a period of nearly a century from 1918 in two states of the UK - England and Wales

From a general perspective, the number of people owning houses is obviously to be seen experiencing an upward trend over the mentioned years while the proportion of tenants undergoes the opposite.

Starting from 1918, the figure of household owner (about 76%) was approximately thrice as much as that of the rented ones (about 24%). However, the number of people buying houses from then on, continually rose and the proportion eventually peaked at nearly 70% in 2001 before experiencing a slight fall of about 5% in the next 10 years. The percentage of tenants in England and Wales, ironically, falls non-stop from more than 78% in 1918 and eventually bottomed at about a third of the total household in 2001. It subsequently recovered to slightly more than 35% 10 years later. Surprisingly, there was a perfectly equal percentage of 50% for both of the household owners and tenants in 1971.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, then, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9606741573 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88491100831 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589887640449 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.4732365058 43.030603864 222% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.166666667 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130180091266 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611308808067 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464325957521 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961448615499 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621746688589 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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