The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by ymj02266 on Mon, 02/11/2019 - 08:47

The given chart shows the information which is about the percentage if household in purchased and rented house in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. It is clear that ration of rented accommodation was dominant until 1961. However, proportion of owned house went beyond after 1981.

At 1918, the rate between owned house and rented house was the largest through all given years which is little under 80 percent for rented house and little over 20 percent for owned house. But the proportion of household in owned accommodation kept rising while rate of rented house decreased or stayed still.

At 1971, the number of people in owned house and rented house was same. After 1971, owned house rate took the majority and rate had increased until 2001. Opposite to that circumstance, rate of rented house had decreased until 2001.

However, in 2011, the rate of rented house increased while the rate of owned house decreased even though tha majority maintained.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ate between owned house and rented house was the largest through all given years ...
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Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...the rate of rented house increased while the rate of owned house decreased even t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04347826087 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37310977696 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484472049689 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3156860272 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2222222222 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197093921429 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108167477187 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110910045253 0.0843802449381 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150973600069 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107177548162 0.0819641961636 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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