Countries becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
With a development of transportation, it has been easier to import and export products nowadays. Moreover, people tend to buy things through internet. As a result, there is an argument of whether it is positive or negative to be similar all over the world by shopping same things regardless of country. In my opinion, I would say it is helpful for both importing and exporting country with including its citizens.
First of all, people have been able to use high quality manufactures from different country. It is good to have more choice when buying a product, so that each company would try to increase their competitiveness. And since everybody has their own taste, each one could be satisfied by choosing the product with their standard.
Secondly, it is also helpful for financial part of society. it is obvious that today society has been globalized. So we need to grow together including developing countries. Importing and exporting are the way to flourish those countries. For example, most of the cosmetics which use coconut oil get the source from Africa. And coconut became main resource for the money to rise the quality of people’s life in Africa.
Finally, countries won’t be the same, even if they use similar product. Using similar product doesn’t mean people become similar. it is just indicating the trend of whole world.
In conclusion, similar international consumption habit not only won’t hurt any part of world, besides it would suggests the way to developing countries to earn the money. So people should buy more things on online.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11969111969 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86882200247 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.755557282 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6666666667 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3888888889 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271220838143 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075250508033 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661973624254 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148755605165 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698476203403 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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