Some people think all lawbreakers should be put into prison, while others believe that there are better alternatives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In accordance to the law, criminals go to jail for specific period depending on their crime. However, there is an argument about making them who is talented among prisoner to work rather than just put them in a jail. In my opinion, I would say it is necessary to imprison them for enough period.
In some reasons, people assert that some talented criminal should be forced to work. First of all, they think it is waste of human resource to let them spend meaningless time in prison. Even though they can contribute to society in some way. Secondly, by making them to work, people says that it will be an education and preparation when they go back to society. Because most of criminals have hard time to adapt to a community and commit a crime again.
however, I think there should be no differentiation between prisoners. It can be some kind of career and benefit to those who work it a jail. As a result, it will be a discrimination to those who couldn’t work, even if they committed same crime. Moreover, imprisoning is not just for isolating them from the public. it is meant to be a punishment. Criminals don’t have right to be thought as special case judging by talent. However, there is a possibility that talented lawbreakers could get benefit as a reward of working, although their freedom is restricted.
In conclusion, even if some people argue that some criminals could work according to their ability, I definitely think that they could be treated as same as others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... them spend meaningless time in prison. Even though they can contribute to society in some ...
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... community and commit a crime again. however, I think there should be no differentia...
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...ust for isolating them from the public. it is meant to be a punishment. Criminals ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, i think, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74329501916 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77170163828 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532567049808 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8874362994 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.375 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168286380158 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599426177871 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503424912621 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108850273565 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380251029078 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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