In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
Due to the development of technology in agriculture, a lot of people have escaped from suffer of hunger. However there are still many people who are starving every day. In this essay, I will argue why this happens and how should we do to solve this problem.
In spite of increase of the amount of product in agriculture, many people are suffering from the starving. There are few reason why this kind of circumstance occurs. First of all, people who are living in developing countries are not able to afford to use the advanced technology or import food from other countries. So most of citizen in that countries couldn’t get proper meal for every day. Secondly, there are also tons of people who are starving to death even they are living in rich countries. They are mostly couldn’t get help from other people or themselves.
so as a citizen living in the globalized world, there are many ways to help them. Mainly, we could donate the money and food through charity such as UNICEF or directly. There are many charities which are run with different purpose and in different nations, so we can pick and subscribe which one to help. More technically, for developing countries, we could teach the technologies that they can use in their situation for free. This is the way to make them have an ability to produce resources by themselves.
In conclusion, there are many people suffering from scarce of food even though there are advanced technology and food to help them. So we should no ignore a torture of poor people and try to help them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: for everyday
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Suggestion: So
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74907749077 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63133527469 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49815498155 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6197177859 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.4375 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216372367398 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741561438674 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611169855365 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143413045015 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778759532484 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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