Some people think all lawbreakers should be put into prison, while others believe that there are better alternatives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Imposing prison sentences is widely accepted in many places around the world. While imprisonment is considered the common way to punish criminals, I believe that other more effective solutions should be considered as well.
On the one hand, some people would argue that the prison sentences have a critically important role to play as a deterrent to the prospective criminals and habitual offenders. This is because by confining those who committed serious crime in an extremely small area and taking away their freedom to meet families, the law enforcement departments punish them with pain both psychologically and physically. As a result, those who intend to receive bribes or abuse animals will weigh the cost carefully.
On the other hand, some people believe that in order to reform criminals, community service and educational causes can act as alternatives. Firstly, community service can make offenders, especially those who committed minor crimes, law-abiding citizens. They can learn how to act as meaningful members of society by cleaning street, removing graffiti and tending gardens, and realize that they can contribute to society. If they are sentenced to prison, they they will mix with other criminals and probably make friends with them. They will not repent or take stock of their lives, so they may reoffend after being released, which can pose a threat to the public. Secondly, vocational training can teach them interpersonal skills and job skills. As a result, crime will not be an option if they know how to make a living.
In conclusion, even though harsh penalty such as prison sentences can as a deterrent, I believe that we still should focusing on changing the behavior of offenders and helping them function as productive members of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23776223776 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80970109888 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601398601399 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3872513076 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132456092878 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479524276926 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051865038597 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859477766042 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328167680856 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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