Some people think all lawbreakers should be put into prison, while others believe that there are better alternatives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is common practice all over the world to send criminals to prison and this is considered as the best way to deal with them. However, some people suggest that alternative solutions are more effective. This essay will discuss the issue from both sides.
According to most people, it is necessary to send criminals to jail for public security and justice. It would have a deterrent effect on those who intend to commit crimes. By contrast, if criminals can escape the punishment, there is a risk that the crime rate would increase and the society would become unstable and dangerous. In addition, it is fair for victims and their relatives to see the criminals imprisoned; otherwise people would protest and lose their confidence in the government and on the law.
However, some people believe that to rehabilitate criminals is likely to need more than a simple imprisonment. Firstly, a large number of people perpetrated crimes because they know little about the law and lack basic skills to earn a living. Therefore, training classes seem to be a better solution, which can raise their awareness about the law and teach them practical skills. Secondly, some law violators are very talented and they are the experts in certain areas. If they were allowed to continue to work and make contribution to the society, it would be beneficial for them and for the society as well.
In my point of view, there is no doubt that criminals, particularly those charged with grave offenses, must be sent to prison, as their behaviors are dangerous. By contrast, if the lawbreakers realize their mistakes and the consequences are not serious, they can be exempted from punishment and alternative ways should be used.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9965034965 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70858082645 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58041958042 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9374485173 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.071428571 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150343432344 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488744204888 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367636730249 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913279165221 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472182067013 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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