Some people think that all law breakers should be put into prison, while others believe that there are better alternatives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
That criminals should be sent into prison has been a widely held opinion. However, some argue that not all law-breakers must be in jail for there are better ways. I believe that both arguments are reasonable in some degree, and that it is always the most appropriate to judge the punishment according to the degree of the crime.
People who support putting all criminals in to the prison may consider this to be the most effective way to deter crime and to ensure the society to function well. There is no denying that if law breakers were not separated from other people, they would pose a threat to the society by being highly susceptible to commit crimes again. In this regard, imprisonment is very effective for it deprives criminals of the freedom for whom it is extremely valuable. Criminals would not be able to harm the society when in the jail, and after they are released, the imprisonment experience could have a deterrent effect so that they dare not break the laws again. By the same token, other people will also discipline themselves.
Despite its effectiveness, sending all criminals into jail is actually costly. Therefore, alternative punishments such as paying fine and doing labor work are proposed by people who aims to reduce the costs. As government budget is limited, money saved from building prisons, improving prison facilities and hiring prison guards could be invested in education and training courses which would benefit the long term. In addition, because people tent to avoid unnecessary costs, they would not break the law if they knew they will have to pay for it.
From my perspective, criminals should receive corresponding punishment. For example, murderers and rapers must be punished harshly, whereas it is not necessary to sent thieves in to jail. Most people committed crime because they have no money, not because of their moral problems. Therefore, providing education and training courses to equip them working skills is more important than imprisonment for it solves the very core of the problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, in addition, such as, by the same token
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07079646018 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66734530744 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560471976401 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8595028952 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217890900614 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744510778765 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636575000991 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14754091412 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981645578463 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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