The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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Submitted by muqdad.aljuboor... on Sun, 06/02/2019 - 11:30
The given bar-chart classifies the ten highest countries in term of using and generating electricity in 2014. the vertical axis represents the rank (1 to 10) for each country, and the horizontal axis refers to the electricity production/consumption in billion kWh.
Overall, for all countries, the production rates were more than the consumption rates except for Germany. Also, the amount of generated and utilized electricity in both China and US equaled the total amount of electricity in the remainder eight countries.
In details, the generation and production rates could be categorized within different ranges. The maximum value was assigned to China with approximately similar production/consumption rate(5,300 billion kWh). This figure was descending in the second country (USA) , which was 4,099 in production and significantly less in consumption ( 3,866). Russia, Japan and India had almost similar production/consumption rate and they ranges between 1000 and 700 billion kWh. another groups were Canada, France, Brazil and Germany which produced/consumed electricity with in the range of (600 to 500) billion kWh.
the minimum tenth value was for Korea republic which was 4850 billion kWh in production and slightly similar in consumption.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, as for, at least, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 3.97073170732 428% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 965.302439024 141% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85836909871 4.92477711251 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.97218942379 2.65546596893 150% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 106.607317073 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600858369099 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 283.868780488 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 104.234896173 43.030603864 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.666666667 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8888888889 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0831560234705 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449880738128 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114042298891 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0498710876486 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110585167035 0.0819641961636 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.0 11.4140731707 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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