The chart below shows the percentage of people of different age groups who went to cinema once a month or more in one European country from 2000 to 2011

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the percentage of people of different age groups who went to cinema once a month or more in one European country from 2000 to 2011.

The line graph illustrates the proportion of people going to the cinema once a month or more in a European country between 2000 and 2011.
Overall, the percentage of moviegoers of all age groups showed an upward trend over the period. In addition, going to the cinema was the most popular activity of people between 15 to 24 years old.
It can be seen that the ratio of the 15 to 24-year-old people was the highest, starting at above 15 percent in the first year 2000, then increased gradually to approximately 35 percent in 2006. After that, this figure saw a fluctuation in 2006-2008 period, then went up rapidly and reached the highest point of nearly five out of ten in the last year 2011. Compared to the youngsters', the figure for people of 35 and over age group started at the lowest point of below 3 percent. The percentage of this age group rose steadily to 13 percent in 2006, a growth of 10 percent in 11 years.
The figures for the two remaining age groups saw the same pattern during the period. In the beginning, the proportions of 7-14 and 25-35 people from exactly one out of ten and 5 percent, respectively, then there was a significant climb up and hit the same point of three tenths in 2011.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49321266968 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5410614121 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552036199095 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7152108562 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5555555556 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280420341425 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118240734466 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905006845552 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190615734729 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961001550495 0.0819641961636 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.