The chart below shows the percentage of school-leavers entering higher education (ie, colleges and universities), and graduate earnings 1 year after graduation
The bar charts compare the proportion of student’s earnings after one year graduation in two different years and there is shown the percentage of high-school leavers who entered to higher education such as colleges and universities.
Overall, it can be seen that in 2007 there were twice more students who entered to the higher education than in 1987 and that in 2007 unemployed rate among graduates decreased steadily compared to 1987.
In 1987, 14% of high-school graduates entered to the higher education, but for the next ten years the percentage rose exponentially to 35%.
46% of high-education graduates earned more than national average in 1987 then there was a very slight growth to 47% after two decades. Graduates from high education who earned less than the national average accounted for 25% in 1987 then, for the following 20 years the percentage increased by 20%
Graduates from high education with earnings more than double the national average and who were unemployed comprised of 18% and 11% respectively in 1987. After a period of twenty years unemployed rate decreased significantly to 3%. And graduates who earned double more than the national average experienced an exponential decline to 5% in 2007.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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...ed of 18% and 11% respectively in 1987. After a period of twenty years unemployed rat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23232323232 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94001867775 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520202020202 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.9855539059 43.030603864 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361191029008 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195207407849 0.103423049105 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118873054469 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239902351945 0.15604864568 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117637211524 0.0819641961636 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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