the chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999
The pie chart illustrates proportion of visitors at four different attractive places in Britain during the year of 1999. Overall, Theme Parks seemed to be the most popular place visited among others, with Blackpool Pleasure Beach becoming the worthiest place to go for many people.
It is evident that Theme Parks constitutes the highest percentage of visitors coming to in 1999 (with 38%). This figure is slightly higher than Museums and Galleries by 1%, which made Museums and Galleries become the second most well-known place in Britain. Moreover, the percentage of tourists to Historic Houses and Monuments accounted for slightly more than a quarter, at 16% whereas just lower than one-tenth (9%) was compromised of Wildlife Parks and Zoos.
Of the pie chart regarding other sight-seeing in Theme Parks, Blackpool Pleasure Beach witnessed nearly a half total percentage (47%). Following that, Alton Tower and Pleasureland, Southport became the second most popular attraction places, with 17% and 16% respectively. Finally, 10% of visitors in Theme Parks came from both Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland, Windsor.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43428571429 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75888176105 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651428571429 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2831009287 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.875 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121530908427 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566110369899 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790045094381 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085782888244 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582924703678 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.