The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.

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The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.

The pie chart illustrates the preference of visitors in terms of 4 different kinds of tourist destinations in the UK in 1999.

Overall, it is immediately clear that theme parks and museums & galleries attracted tourists the most, whereas wildlife parks and zoos were the least favorite place of interest in Britain in the given year.

Looking at the chart in detail, theme parks constituted the largest percentage among these given categories, at 38% with 5 certain places named. Specifically, around a half of tourists visiting theme parks went to Blackpool pleasure beach, while the remaining sites accounted for the other half, ranging from 10% to 17%.

Regarding the rest of categories of tourist attractions, the second most preferable site belonged to museums & galleries, at 37%. This was followed by the percentage of historic houses & monuments, which was nearly half as high as that of theme parks. Finally, wildlife parks & zoos came last with 9%.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, regarding, second, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79420165531 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681818181818 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4308175545 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122967353139 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526883972308 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484479945332 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822090453455 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434609881603 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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