The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999.
The pie chart illustrates the distribution of tourists who visited four groups of tourist attractions in Britain in 1999. And the table summarizes the percentage of visitors visited the fives famous places in Theme Parks.
As can be seen from the pie chart, tourists preferred the most Theme Part, accounted for 38% of the whole, followed by museums and galleries and historic houses and monuments made up 37 percentages and 16 percentages respectively. Wildlife Parks and Zoos took the least proportion at only 9% of the whole.
In the largest proportion – Theme Park, most visitors referred to Blackpool Pleasure Beach, accounted for almost haft of the whole, the second and third favorite places were Alton Towers and Pleasureland, Southport which made up 17% and 16% respectively. The two places had the least attractive to tourists were Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland, Windsor took the same proportion at 10%.
In conclusion, visitors went to Britain had the tendency to go to Theme Park and museums and galleries. And Blackpool Pleasure Beach was the most attractive place at Theme Park.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, third, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21666666667 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84697695421 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572222222222 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9671792138 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.375 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156555373371 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860162688456 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136762145269 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11881400855 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127745396428 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.