The pie chart provides information regarding a university’s Anthropology students pursuing activities after their graduation, and also the table provides information about their incomes after 5 years of experience.
First of all, the vast majority of graduates do a full-time job, and as the pie chart shows it is 52%. Furthermore, part-time work has the second place at only 15% after full-time work with a noticeable difference, followed by unemployed people at 12%. It is worth noting that the differences between unknown activities after graduation and also students who do full-time postgraduate study are comparable, and a tiny minority (5%) of postgraduate students do a part-time job.
Turning to the table, salaries between $25000-$74999 are mainly paid by private companies (45%) in contrast with government sectors and freelance consultants that are totally a mere 20% for both of them. However, high salaries ($75000-$100000+) are for freelance consultants and government sectors ( 80% for both) broadly.
To conclude, it is obvious that the overwhelming majority of graduates undertake full-time work, and the highest incomes are for people who work for the government and do freelance consultants.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...lance consultants and government sectors 80% for both broadly. To conclude, it...
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Suggestion:
...overnment and do freelance consultants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, regarding, second, so, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5652173913 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16569439191 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7312468535 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.285714286 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4285714286 5.23603664747 237% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190614579902 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867761840382 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699000364624 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112415854008 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803388504889 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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