The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of anthropologists in five years. Summarise the information by reporting the main feature and make a comparison where possible.
The pie chart diagram predicts information about what did Anthropologists holding an undergraduate degree after completing their studies. It divided into 6 categories with full-time work, part time work, full time postgrad, study with the job, unemployed, and not known. While the table below provides information about 3 types of employment Anthropology graduates doing and pay received with 5 years of experience.
In the pie chart, highest number of degree holder were doing full time job which account 52 percent. In contrast, lowest number were working as part time with their postgraduate studies. 15 percent and 12 percent respectively, were part time worker and unemployed. The rest of 8 percent were interested in full time higher education and exact same percent were unkown about their decision.
In the table about salaries ranging from 25000$ to 100000$ in three different fields. As an overall trend, largest number of people were working in every department earning 100000$ plus amount. The freelancer consultant was getting pay more than 75000$ accounted 80 percent employees, while 70 percent in government sector and 55 percent in private companies.
Although exactly 20 percent individuals were doing jobs in freelance consultant and in government sector and 45 percent in private factories recieving salaries less than 75000$.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... into 6 categories with full-time work, part time work, full time postgrad, study with th...
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Line 1, column 205, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...es with full-time work, part time work, full time postgrad, study with the job, unemploye...
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Line 2, column 17, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the highest'.
Suggestion: , the highest
...5 years of experience. In the pie chart, highest number of degree holder were doing full...
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Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...hest number of degree holder were doing full time job which account 52 percent. In contra...
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Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the lowest'.
Suggestion: , the lowest
...ob which account 52 percent. In contrast, lowest number were working as part time with t...
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Line 2, column 144, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...contrast, lowest number were working as part time with their postgraduate studies. 15 per...
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Line 2, column 232, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...rcent and 12 percent respectively, were part time worker and unemployed. The rest of 8 pe...
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Line 2, column 306, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...he rest of 8 percent were interested in full time higher education and exact same percent...
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Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25000'.
Suggestion: $25000
...n the table about salaries ranging from 25000$ to 100000$ in three different fields. A...
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Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100000'.
Suggestion: $100000
...e about salaries ranging from 25000$ to 100000$ in three different fields. As an overal...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the largest'.
Suggestion: , the largest
...ee different fields. As an overall trend, largest number of people were working in every ...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$100000'.
Suggestion: $100000
...ere working in every department earning 100000$ plus amount. The freelancer consultant ...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$75000'.
Suggestion: $75000
...er consultant was getting pay more than 75000$ accounted 80 percent employees, while 7...
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Line 4, column 171, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$75000'.
Suggestion: $75000
... factories recieving salaries less than 75000$.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49038461538 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81624093745 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8399925246 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.818181818 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115004969413 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565344357834 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771964149845 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723758743237 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714997997278 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.