The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years

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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart depicts the employment or higher education status of Anthropology students from a tertiary establishment after having received a degree for their undergraduate course. The table gives information on how much anthropologists earned after half a decade of working.

Overall, having a full-time job is a prevalent choice of students with the figure crossing the 50% mark, getting the lion’s share of the chart for that matter. Regarding the table. anthropologists making over 100,000 dollars after 5 years in the government sector is the most common, as opposed to other sectors where the number clustered between 5% and 35%.

As per the chart, apart from the destination of working full-time, many graduates gravitated towards the part-time job, and some even haven’t considered taking any job, which accounts for 15% and 12%, respectively. Noticeably, those who did the postgraduate study while working part-time, and those whose destination was not known, share the same rate of merely 10%. In addition, post-graduates and part-time workers only take up 5% of the chart.

Considering the table, in the section of freelance consultants and government sector, those whose salaries ranging from 25,000 to 49,999 dollars, and from 50,000 to 74,999 dollars have the same trend of accounting for 5% and 15%, respectively. What is more, the former group also witnessed the same rate of 40% in higher-income tiers.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...rse. The table gives information on how much anthropologists earned after half a dec...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Anthropologists
...t for that matter. Regarding the table. anthropologists making over 100,000 dollars after 5 yea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, regarding, so, while, apart from, in addition, what is more

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37777777778 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01005393496 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648888888889 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2264516895 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195391003518 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713979030779 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591777331203 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118447091822 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785610974933 0.0819641961636 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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