the chart below shows what the anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. the table shows the salaries of those anthropologists after 5 years of work
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where possible
The pie chart illustrates the Anthropology undergraduate students from one university end up after completing their graduation, while the table chart provides information about the income of those anthropologists after completing five years of work.
Overall, more than half the graduates were full-time employed, and around 5% of students continued their post graduation study while working in part-time. Fifty percentage of the government sector graduates earned more than hundred thousand dollars, while similar income is seen in 40% and 30% of freelance consultants and people who are working in private companies respecitvely.
Post-graduation, 52% of students got full-time job and followed by 15% of students end up in part-time job. Unemployment rate was 12% among these students, furthermore, full-time postgraduate study and status unknown were around 8%.
On the types of employment35% of people who worked in private companies, had income ranging between fifty thousand to seventy five thousand dollars. Freelance consultants and government employees had similar income range where nearly 80% of people earned more than $75000.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
...nment sector graduates earned more than hundred thousand dollars, while similar income ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82738095238 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11963257873 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6287004191 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.857142857 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162085965418 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731648567068 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125773984092 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115691103106 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151859655363 0.0819641961636 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.2329268293 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 61.2550243902 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.83 11.4140731707 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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