The chart shows British emigration to selected destinations betweem 2004 and 2007.

Essay topics:

The chart shows British emigration to selected destinations betweem 2004 and 2007.

The bar chart depicts the information about the British people in thousand who went to four different nations from 2004 to 2007. As an overview, Australia was the most popular destination among the Britishers.

It is clear from the chart that, in the first year most of the British people went to Australia and it noticed as 40 thousand. Which was higher than to Spain. Afterwards, the next years, the most of the British people liked to visit in the NeUSA as well as France with almost under 20 thousand. However, 40 thousand of the Britishers went to Australia in the next year which declined by 7 thousand in the case of Spain. Further, the emigration was almost half in comparison to other two countries.

In addition to this, in 2000, nearly 52 thousand of Britishers went to Australia which surged to 35 thousand in the following year. Whereas, in the France, USA and Newzealand the migration ranged 20 to 25 thousand in 2006. At last, in the last year, Britishers went to Australia observed as 45 thousand and 25 thousand in Spain. In the Newzealand,USA and France it recorded as 20 thousand, 19 thousand and 17 thousand .

To sum up, emigration of British people in Spain, Newzealand as well as USA and France decreased by the end of the given time period because it increased in the case of Australia.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...information about the British people in thousand who went to four different nations from...
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...hart that, in the first year most of the British people went to Australia and it ...
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ustralia and it noticed as 40 thousand. Which was higher than to Spain. Afterwards, t...
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... to visit in the NeUSA as well as France with almost under 20 thousand. However, ...
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... 25 thousand in Spain. In the Newzealand,USA and France it recorded as 20 thousand, ...
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...20 thousand, 19 thousand and 17 thousand . To sum up, emigration of British peo...
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..., emigration of British people in Spain, Newzealand as well as USA and France dec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, well, whereas, in addition, as well as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70995670996 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7034350809 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471861471861 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3366779806 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 5.23603664747 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133708578769 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567977667169 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536942998984 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105273754317 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644633943711 0.0819641961636 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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