The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

Essay topics:

The chart shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

The bar chart depicts the percentage of family living in England and Wales with purchased accommodation or rented house in a 93 year period from 1918.

As can be seen from the chart, while renting houses was one of the most common ways in 1918, the trend of owning accommodation climbed during the time shown.

In 1918, the percentage of citizens in England and Wales rented accommodation was 78% which was nearly fourfold of the proportion of households owning a house. There was a slight decrease in the data of family in rented accommodation from 69% in 1939 to 59% in 1961. 41% was the number of residents possessed a place to live in 1961.

1971 saw a remarkable change in both figures when the percentage of two categories were exactly equal at 50%. In the following years, compared to the proportion of households in purchased accommodation reached a peak at nearly 70% in 2001 before falling to 63% in 2011, the equivalent figure of tenants went down substantially to 35% in 2011.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82080924855 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8328889462 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578034682081 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.999791753 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 5.23603664747 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388780597745 0.215688989381 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162112171394 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128155738535 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222058872415 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730171293639 0.0819641961636 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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