Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argued that it is better to try and improve such situations.
It is said that a number of people willing to accept some unhappy situations happening in their life such as lacking of money or can not do their dream job. While I agree that people should admit some events happening unwillingly, I believe that giving a try and finding solutions are optimal choices.
On the one hand, there are two main reasons for why some people accept their imperfect circumstances. One of the major factors is that the income from undesirable job is also better than unemployed. This is due to the fact that adults, especially parents extremely need money to pay for plenty of essential things like housing or education for their children. Moreover, a number of people have a propensity to put their trust in the wrong place leading to the phenomenon that they are taken advantage. For example, friends on social media who are really difficult to know each other characteristic. As a result, some people are cheated on their money or valuable items such as smartphone or motorbike.
On the other hand, it is also argued that people try to find solutions when unlucky event happen is the ideal option. Firstly, this method facilitates people enormously in gaining positive attitude after facing bad situations. The benefit of this is that people will not be depressed which could affect their mental health so far. Another point I would like to mention is that fixing the situation will assist people profoundly in obtaining experience for following things happen in the future. Consequences, people get used to with tough situations and easily have better decision.
To sum up, although some people accept taking all bad things as dissatisfaction, attempt to put more effort to look for result is always the best option.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: try to
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, really, so, while, for example, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01365187713 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67079621003 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590443686007 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8078004183 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.928571429 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274762608584 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897527086521 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583898889281 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164798466392 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372604396115 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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