Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is said that people in this contemporary life have a large number of opportunities in all aspects of life. I strongly believe that there are a wide variety of choices for people nowadays rather than in the past.
On the one hand, a number of options can be listed for people to choose ranging from entertainment to education. Initially, youngsters and children in this modern life can easily pick up their favorite things to relax and enjoy. One of the most common activities is watching the latest movies which can be screened from normal cinemas to five-star cinemas with better services. Besides, singing at the karaoke or playing computer games are also the optimal choices for them to entertain. Secondly, people in this age are able to choose where they will be educated depending on their demand and wallet. For example, there are several types of school for children such as public school, private school, international school or bi-lingual school. Even some people have already graduated from university, they have a tendency to join advanced classes to support for their jobs like accountants, human resource or computer skills.
Furthermore, opportunities to travel overseas also increase dramatically in this present time. This is due to the fact that more and more countries have opened to encourage tourists visit their country which not only facilitate their country enormously in boosting the economy but also assist travellers have a chance to enrich their knowledge and experience. Another key matter worth mentioning is that the more the country is modernization the more job opportunities are created. Take a content writer or video editor as examples, these jobs have been recently hunted these years.
In conclusion, it is true that people in this period have more chances than in the previous generation, including entertainment, education, travelling and jobs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...t people in this contemporary life have a large number of opportunities in all aspects of life. I...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to range'.
Suggestion: to range
...ions can be listed for people to choose ranging from entertainment to education. Initia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, as to, even so, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26973684211 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79964745691 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595394736842 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4159403624 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.428571429 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143405765768 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050766785629 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403614919257 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100055173024 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375624301309 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.