The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The bar chart depicts the amount billion kWh of electricity generated and consumed in in ten distinction countries in 2004.
As can be seen from the chart, there was no significant difference between the amount of electricity production and consumption of each country. China was the country producing and using electricity top one worldwide while South Korean consumed the least during the time shown.
In China, they generated 5.398 billion kWh and used 5.322 billion kWh electricity which was nearly tenfold higher than that of Brazil. While USA produced 4.099 billion kWh of electricity in 2004, they only used 3.866 billion kWh. There was a dramatic decrease in the amount of consumption and generation in following countries such as Russia, Japan, India which were hovered around 700 to 1.057 billion kWh.
Germany was the only country which had the amount of electricity using at 582.5 billion kWh higher than the equivalent figure of their production. Korean Republic witnessed the lowest billion kWh in both production and consumption electricity which was 485.1 and 449.5 respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38505747126 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74092142975 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.694781639 43.030603864 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.166666667 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198026067262 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130953886026 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689509512264 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161727542427 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733328594019 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.