The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The pie charts compare the proportion of three different elements consuming by US people in each meal of the day.

As can be seen from the charts, there are different percentages of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in four meals of US people. Each pie chart describes the distinction percentage of each type of nutrients in three main meals and snacks.

The figure for three elements in breakfast are nearly the same and hover around 14% to 16%. The data of sodium containing in Lunch is the highest percentage at 29% while the equivalent figure of Added Sugar is just 19%.

Snacks are seemed to be the most unhealthy meal just simply because it has nearly a half percentage of Added sugar at 42% while 14% and 21% are the data of Sodium and Saturated fat, respectively. Each meal of dinner in the US contains approximately 43% of Sodium, 37% of Saturated fat and 23% of Added sugar.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70440251572 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57090425199 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540880503145 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8816040611 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.857142857 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 5.23603664747 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166328486568 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856304412242 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513197522946 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110925692131 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530098374708 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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