The chart shows the percentage of whole world population in four countries from 1950 to 2000,with projections till 2050.

Essay topics:

The chart shows the percentage of whole world population in four countries from 1950 to 2000,with projections till 2050.

The bar chart elucidates the information about comparison in the proportion of population in four nations namely india, china, USA and japan from 1950 to 2000 and also manifest the projections for 2050.

Overall, it is evident that population on india will be maximum and least position in population would be acquired by Japan in speculated year.

By scrutinizing the data,it is clear that in 1950 china consisted over a quarter of population, although it slumped under a quarter in 2000 and firmly stand on highest position opposing to other three nations however it is estimated to be drop in 2050.

By analyzing further, india showed an opposing trend to china. A minority of population was consisted by india in 1950 however it escalated over 20% in speculated year of 2050.The proportion of population of USA and Japan represented a downward trend both showed depletion from 1950 to 2000 but USA will remain identical in predicted year of 2050 whereas in Japan, population will keep falling till 2050.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02649006623 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74474351199 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556291390728 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 22.4926829268 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3449187095 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 253.0 112.824112599 224% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.3333333333 22.9334400587 219% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.23603664747 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275328703602 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187941811092 0.103423049105 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537570970641 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174964326785 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102105827576 0.0819641961636 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.4 13.2329268293 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 29.19 61.2550243902 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.51609756098 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 10.3012195122 210% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.06136585366 126% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.4329268293 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.9970731707 200% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 11.0658536585 199% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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