The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.

Essay topics:

The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.

Given are two charts, the line graph comparing the number of travels made by British residents and visits from other countries to the UK over a period of 20 years. Besides, the bar chart provides information about most preferred countries by community members of the UK in the year 1999. Measures are shown in millions for both charts.

A brief analysis of the figures reveals that while the number of travels to and from the UK saw a considerable increase over the given period, France was the most favourite tourism destination for Britain’s people.

Climbing from just over 10 million in 1979 to about 20 million in 1984 travels by British residents then witnessed an exponential surge and reached a peak at nearly 52 million in 1999. The trend for visits to the UK was almost same as the visits from the UK, rising from 10 million to slightly over that number in first five years and then a significant growth to somewhere in the vicinity of 29 million in the last year of the period.

Regarding popular destinations for UK citizens, France, by around 11 million visits was accounted for the first enjoyable country for them. The second place by slightly less than 10 million went to Spain. Nonetheless, the USA, Greece, and Turkey attracted less than 5 million tourists from Britain. Among them, Turkey was the least popular, visited by only 2 million people.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, nonetheless, regarding, second, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1140.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83050847458 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58157279546 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.629791892 43.030603864 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363977546843 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140528438472 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0979159786045 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231287296119 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923431178624 0.0819641961636 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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