The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The three pie charts illustrate average proportions of different types of nutrients in typical meals that can be unhealthy if consumed excessively.

In general, both sodium and saturated fat are mostly consumed at dinner, while being eaten the least at breakfast. In addition, it seems that people have added sugar mostly in snacks.

To begin with, the percentages in typical meals that consume sodium and saturated fat are quite similar. In particular, Americans consume these types of nutrients the most during dinner, with 43% for sodium and 37% for saturated fat. By contrast, the figure for sodium consumption is only around 14% in snacks time or at breakfast, while that of saturated fat is also consumed the least at breakfast, with just about 16%.

Furthermore, nearly half of the proportions of added sugar consumption is during snack hours, at around 42%. Similar to the two other nutrients, added sugar is also eaten the least in the morning at breakfast, Finally, the percentages for lunch and dinner meals that contain sugar are 19% and 23% respectively.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, so, while, in addition, in general, in particular, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18857142857 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71263107461 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5434636856 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 5.23603664747 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111449394482 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609172014676 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756346225646 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944395667224 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832324780615 0.0819641961636 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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