Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Football events generally attract a lot of people's attention because of the hype and excitement they bring. Many people enjoy watching it to ease international tensions and express patriotic emotions. However, in this essay, I will point out two main reasons why I disagree with this point of view.
Firstly, football occasions tend to make people get over-excited and do inappropriate actions. For example, when Vietnam football team won a match against the Japanese, people were shouting and honking everywhere on the streets, creating traffic jams, racing motorcycles illegally. While some people might say that these actions represent them being proud of the country's achievement, others would think that there are many other ways to express their happiness appropriately.
Secondly, the match might end up badly for the losing team, including the crowd cheering for them as well. If Vietnam football team lose the game, the audience will blame the opponents for being unfair. It is uncertain whether the opinion is actually true, but regardless of the outcomes, the way they handled it is unsurprisingly inappropriate. People would curse the other team online without even knowing them. They would use bad language to insult the opponent players, sometimes even threaten to kill them. This has led to producing bad reputation about our country, creating more tensions between countries, making football less enjoyable.
In conclusion, I think that sporting occasions are good ways to gain excitement from football fans, but how they react to the occasions needs to be reconsidered. Football events should end in cheers and celebrations, not violence and aggressive behaviors. People should control their emotions and not expressing it in a wrong way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a wrong way" with adverb for "wrong"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ol their emotions and not expressing it in a wrong way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41818181818 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80934920848 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647272727273 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4804245203 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193898525133 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622286849164 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440788731533 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121037989556 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482753904292 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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