The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and the amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019

Essay topics:

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and the amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts depict the percentage of households equipped with electrical devices and how much time was spent on doing house chores in a country from 1920 to 2019.

Overall, the trend regarding the ownership of refrigerators and vacuum cleaners was an increase as opposed to a fluctuation seen in washing machines for that matter. In addition, the amount of time allocated for housework reduced significantly through the period.

As per the chart, from 1920 to 1960, there was a prominent rise in the rate of refrigerator installation rocketing from 0% to 90%. During the same time period, that of vacuum cleaner doubled and that of washing machine crossed 70% mark. In the next 20 years, the rate of households installing refrigerators increased by 10%, whereas the figure for washing machines decreased by the same amount. The percentage of refrigerator and washing machine reached a plateau in 1980 and 2000, respectively. However, that of washing machines recover and continue to have a gradual rise up to 70% in 2019.

Regarding the number of hours of housework, from 1920 to 1960, halved and slowed down before stabilizing between the period of 1980 and 2000. From that point onward, it decreased slightly towards 2019.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, whereas, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14427860697 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83008060028 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557213930348 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2489097566 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21518787719 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814758166076 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846423959187 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14850430508 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959410221416 0.0819641961636 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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