The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the national university in the years 1990,2000,and 2010.

Essay topics:

The charts below show degrees granted in different fields at the national university in the years 1990,2000,and 2010.

The three pie charts illustrate degrees granted at the National University, in different matters and years. The fields were Computer Science, Medicine, Law and Business, whereas the years were 1990, 2000 and 2010.

In 1990, the degrees in Computer Science and Business outweighed the others, and they had the same amount, just under one in three of total, while the degrees in Law were half and the quantity of degrees in Medicine was 25 percent.

Ten years later, in 2000, the amount of Business and Law degrees decreased at one in five and one in ten, respectively. The number of degrees in Medicine increased of 5 percent and in Computer Science of 10 percent.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 560.0 965.302439024 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 114.0 196.424390244 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91228070175 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.26757987692 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53355444435 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 60.0 106.607317073 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 162.9 283.868780488 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3809487803 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290030431594 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154464203708 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859246358744 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207007051177 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128271541075 0.0819641961636 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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