The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in 6 areas of the world

Essay topics:

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in 6 areas of the world.

The pie charts reveal the change in the proportion consumed for three different fields in six nations of the world.

Overall, it is evident that while the rates of agricultural use always are the largest in South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia, the percentages of this purpose in North America and Europe witness the second point, after the figure for Industrial use. In addition, the amount of water used for domestic always is lower than other purposes.

Looking at Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia and South America, there are a remark percent, which all up to over 1 in every 8 in the figures for Agricultural use, without this rate in South America. These proportion always have far higher approximately 5 times, compared with other percentages in one country. The percentages of water used for domestic in Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia are identical, at 9 percent, 7 percent and 7 percent respectively. By contrast, the proportions of the same purpose in North America, South America and Europe sharply increase, stand at over 10 percent.

The percentages of water used for industry in North America and Europe experience a significantly percent, at exactly 48 percent and 53 percent respectively. The opposite was true for the figures of Industrial use in remain areas accounted for under 10 percent, which have lower nearly 4 times than that in North America and Europe.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'percents'?
Suggestion: percents
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02966101695 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71131813884 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504237288136 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8733024414 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.888888889 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2222222222 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24515710546 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118192722206 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553048374773 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173421240152 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361979379342 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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