The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

Essay topics:

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The pie charts illustrate the consumption of water in industrial, agricultural, and domestic, in North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia, and Southeast Asia.
It can be seen from the pie charts, the percentage of water used in West nations remains the biggest on industrial use, apart from South America. Meanwhile, Africa and Asia have the most popular figure on domestic use.
To begin with, two countries of West, North America and Europe have the highest proportion water used for industrial. The figure go up by 48% and 53% respectively. Meanwhile, in South America water is used for agricultural, which goes on significantly 71%. However, all of which has the lowest water used for domestic, respectively 13%, 19%, and 15%.
On the other hand, domestic use goes on the largest percentage of the three nations, Africa, Central Asia, and Southeast Asia. The numbers reach to 84%, 88%, and 81% respectively that are excessively than the West. The percentage of water used for domestic in six areas of the world is still the lowest consumption, most of them are under 20%.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, while, apart from, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06077348066 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78597699861 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563535911602 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0345667381 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274378549369 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111630845422 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977352312347 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162263441626 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668860649069 0.0819641961636 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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