Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or work in a foreign language. Others say that there are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
As far as the population of the world, education is one of the majority factors that has been attracting a great deal of media attention recently. While some people argue that the purpose of learning foreign language is go abroad or get career in oversea, others and I think that people learn foreign language not only for the above reasons, but also for many different ones.
The variety of foreign language that increase the trend of learning foreign language, but the main purpose of this trend is travel or work in oversea. The development of the world involves the better language skill. For example, so as to apply for whatever companies, language certificate is always involved. They not only demand your personal skills, but also your language levels.
Although this first point of the discussion is not thoroughly wrong, but others and I think that there are several reasons for people to learn foreign language. Firstly, the culture of a nation is showed by language. For instance, Vietnamese is appreciated to be a beautiful language, coming from many historical events of human in the past. It shows the traditional beauty of this country. Secondly, media entertainments almost use foreign language for its social media. A good example of this is films normally use popular language, Englis, that many people try to learn English just for understanding what that film talk about.
In conclusion, while someone may think that learning a foreign language so as to go abroad or get career in oversea should be prioritize, I would content that the aim of learning a different language is cultural countries and entertainment facilities, are a long term solution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04332129964 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73357915634 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537906137184 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.46634598 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.461538462 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45382082945 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141851375493 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129008043207 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287799767148 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651639810677 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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