Some people believe that corporal punishment will spoil the children. While others believe that, it is the best method of teaching discipline to children. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
Nowadays, there are many problems that the children are concerned have been attracting a great deal of media attention. Someone think that physical punishment can be harmful to children, whereas others believe that it is the most popular approach of teaching of young people. Personally, I think children should be corporal punished to control themselves.
The discussion can be started with a look into the unfavourable factors of the issue. Firstly, physical punishment not only directly affect to configuration, but also psychology. For example, many people have uprising trend because of their violent childhood. Especially, terrorists who were maltreated when they were young that lead to be unstable in psychology.
In terms of benefits that this issue may present, the most important point of all is that corporal punishment prevents children from reiterating bad deed. For instance, it is the good way to self-restraint due to their scared. Most of youngsters only stop the deed cause they do not want to be punished without thinking the consequence of that issue. On the downside, physical punishment makes children follow the rules. Children, who have well-disciplined, usually seem to be good citizens in the future, to be clearer. Good citizen is the main factor of international inhabitant.
In my own point, I certainly believe that corporal punishment is the most popular method of teaching self-restraint to young people. It remains the biggest discussion on stopping reiterating bad deed and following the rules that seem to be a good workers in the future.
As can be seen from the above, there are more pluses to children's punishment. No matter how this issue is deal with, caution should be taken due to the two opposite affects like what has been discussed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
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Message: The pronoun 'Someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
... great deal of media attention. Someone think that physical punishment can be harmful...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the youngsters') or simply say ''Most youngsters''.
Suggestion: Most of the youngsters; Most youngsters
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Line 4, column 247, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'worker'?
Suggestion: worker
...lowing the rules that seem to be a good workers in the future. As can be seen from the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, look, may, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21254355401 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96977371207 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554006968641 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3058091481 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192899686294 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653182908944 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641341710748 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114372224605 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704325649 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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