The charts below show the proportion of holidaymakers using four different types of accommodations in three different years Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The charts below show the proportion of holidaymakers using four different types of accommodations in three different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The rendered chart provides the statistical data about the visitors who used 4 different types of accommodations in 1988, 1998 and 2008.

Overall, a cursory glance makes it clear that tourists preferred staying with family and friends had the most proportion in the given pie chart among all the 4 distinct types.

To begin with the details, in 1988, people least liked staying in rented apartments and the figure noted was 7%, whereas almost half of the total population chose to stay with family and friends. Other categories such as camping and hotels had their proportion recorded for 26% and 15%, respectively. After a decade, the percentage for camping halved; the figure for rented apartments and hotels inclined by 4% and 7%, in respective order, however the grading for staying with family and friends remained the same.

Proceeding ahead, in 2008, the figure for rented apartments doubled from the previous given year. The percentage of hotels and camping was unaltered but the rating for family and friends experienced a decline of 10% while it remained at the top preference.

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Average: 5.5 (5 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, whereas, while, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12849162011 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61956969295 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586592178771 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8691291109 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.142857143 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0817555963473 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452813484506 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625567780816 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071734733785 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704825156375 0.0819641961636 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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