The chart below shows the total number of minutes in billions of telephone calls in the UK divided into three categories from 1995 2002 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The rendered bar chart provides the statistical data on total number of minutes of telephone calls in the UK by three different means from 1995 and 2002.

Overall, a cursory glance is enough to make it clear that the calls made via local-fixed line were dominating over the other two categories despite experiencing the downward trend in the given time span.

To embark with, in year 1995, the local-fixed line calls had the maximum number of minutes reported and that is 71 billion minutes, approximately. Following an upward trend till 1999, the figures accounted for 90 billion minutes. However, the numerals for the given class in 2002 dropped down to its initial record in 1995.

Probing further, both national and international-fixed line and mobiles groups depicted a similar rising shift throughout the given seven years. The former class in 1995 had its data reported as 37 billion minutes and increased up to 61 billion minutes in last given year. The mobiles classification started from 3 billion minutes in the initial year and soared with the statistics of 45 billion minutes in 2002.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 278, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'mobiles'' or 'mobile's'?
Suggestion: mobiles'; mobile's
...billion minutes in last given year. The mobiles classification started from 3 billion m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08241758242 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77246126763 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9944191979 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.625 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272183284256 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120411236073 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101137253375 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175296737571 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100869425266 0.0819641961636 123% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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