The charts below show the proportions of the world’s oil resources held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the proportions of the world’s oil resources held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas.

The percentage of oil resources in certain areas and the consumption toward their products every year are depicted in the bar charts.
Overall, several countries produce more oil than their necessity. Also, the excess of this will be imported for those who have oil scarcity.
Middle East countries hold the important rules as by far the biggest oil producers, accounting with just over a half from world production, but the use of their own resources almost similar with Central and South America as well as Eastern Europe which only have under 10% production. Similarly, such resources are available in a higher amount than needed for Canada and Africa with remaining oil around 12% and 3% oil subsequently.
The abundant oil then is exported to the rest of the countries. Asia, USA, and Western Europe take the majority of them as they use around 10 times more than their production. Also, the remaining countries only export halving from their resources where Australia and New Zealand need around 1% and other obtains1.40% of oil resources.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, similarly, so, then, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06358381503 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60374950995 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647398843931 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0127515617 43.030603864 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.5 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1189488477 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535797547522 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320186803886 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721845526658 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348716716872 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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