The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for traveling public in US in 2009

Essay topics:

The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for traveling public in US in 2009

The given charts provide information on the purpose of using public transport system, and the major challenges encountered en route , in america, in 2009; respectively. The unit is in percentage. Overall, work and cost of transportation are the main reason and problem respectively, while visitation is the least need to travel.
The bar chart shows that almost half of the reasons us residents commute is work related, whereas, just a fraction of it(6%), is to visit family and friends. The other factors why people go on trips include personal reasons (19%), shopping (16%), and for social, which is 6% lesser than shopping.
However, the pie chart indicates that the america populace are faced with six challenges while using public transport; with price of travelling taking the lead at 36%. 19% and 17% are also concerned with safety and aggressive drivers respectively. Lastly, lack of pedestrian spaces bothers 6%, the least of all the issues with public vehicles.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he major challenges encountered en route , in america, in 2009; respectively. The ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, lastly, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17197452229 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7723541918 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694267515924 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3923485071 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.5 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273382138308 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085085065597 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540268792424 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152354393411 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265491204767 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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