Some people think that teacher must have certain characteristics while other says it can be achieved by training. do u agree or disagree? give your opinion with relevant examples.
Every profession have specific traits required for success. To this end, some individuals opined that certain characteristics should be present in teachers, while others suggest they can be trained in those qualities. I am of the opinion that anyone going into teaching must possess some qualities and as well need educating.
On the one hand, being an effective tutor depends on particular abilities such as patience which is natural but can be learnt. In other words, someone who is usually not patient can still be a good teacher by imbibing the attribute. For instance, my father is doing well in educating young minds, despite being impatient as a youth.
On the other hand, some talents cannot be learnt, no matter how hard one tries. Due to the fact that some people are already set in their ways, trying to change to fit into teaching might prove difficult.
For example, I still could not speak calmly to my children, because I'm mostly overwhelmed with their childhood stubbornness.
Summing up, my opinion is that those in education field are expected to possess particular qualities. Not all of these could be imbibed because they are natural. Nevertheless, they can be taught, although it might not be as efficient as for those who own such attributes on their own.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, so, still, well, while, as for, for example, for instance, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97209302326 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66834092024 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646511627907 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7412398585 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0833333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.58333333333 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233387015037 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782553421875 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509584513917 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117286541449 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677452607866 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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