Being a celebrity- such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
it is highly unlikely that one goes through life without having challenges. Therefore, some people opined that negative circumstances, such as unsatisfactory job, should be tolerated, while others suggest that it is better to work towards improvement. my believe is that, we should learn to know when to fight to make bad situations better, and time to live with them.
On the one hand, acceptance of problems is a form of mental defence mechanism that ensure contentment and happiness at all cost. this is because the mind is already conditioned to manage such crisis without having to be pressured to find solution. For instance, some cultures and religion believe that life is already predestined, so humans have no influence on the happenings. Evidently, people of such faith are more satisfied with life, whether it is the good or bad occurence.
On the other hand, it is fairly common characteristic of living beings to aim at seeking means of getting out of difficult issues. that is why desert animals will migrate to areas where they can access water, in a bid to survive the heat; and not just waiting in the region of scarcity, trying to cope. this attribute is not limited only to animals, but also humans. it gives hope that keep us going and also invariably take away the challenges, if we work hard enough.
Concluding, my opinion is that both attitudes to life issues must be balanced. while managing crisis, without seeking solutions might result t poor standard of living, working hard for better condition too can result in unnecessary tension and sadness; especially when the effort fails. so, we must be able to identify which situation needs to be managed and the one that need adjustment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94117647059 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7255280243 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643598615917 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1799224927 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105200200134 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341843155782 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359230643295 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0600749210374 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304642170705 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.