Being a celebrity - such as famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits.Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
people have different views about what it is like to be a superstar, for example, a popular artist or successful sportsman. While I believe being a celebrity gain many profits, I would argue that it suffers some drawbacks.
To begin with, being a famous person brings many advantages. First of all, celebrities seemingly accumulate much more wealth than general employees, indeed their salary range depends on their own reputation. For instance, Ed Sheeran is one of the most well-known singers in this decade, according to many information sources, his property approximately mounts to 110 million dollars – which is identical belongings for regular people. Secondly, those who are famous presumably receive much love from their fans over the world. Therefore, it can be the mental motivation for celebrities to achieve more success in their career.
However, besides those profits, working as a celebrity has generous drawbacks. Initially, they are probably put much strain on by the community and even their fans. celebrities are required to perform their best and restrain their manners or behavior. Along these lines, plenty of famous people have tendencies to bear mental illness or depression, few of them who cannot release stress, notwithstanding their fortunate career, choosing suicide. For example, the leader of Linkin Park, Chester Bennington committed suicide in the grief of many fans by virtue of depression. Moreover, notoriety is rather unstable, celebrities’ achievement could be easily collapsed after one night by scandals. A large number of popular people lost their reputation and career in this way.
In conclusion, although being a celebrity brings many benefits, I accept that is much more challenging than regular jobs, which suffer various drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50724637681 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90466745905 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655797101449 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7533487263 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2666666667 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219866638203 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797154221972 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791461429057 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155174069861 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625500935104 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.